Active Writing (essay #2)
Richard A. Bales
Ohio Northern University - Pettit College of Law
Bench & Bar (Kentucky), Vol. 66, No. 1, January 2002
This is the second in a series of short, entertaining essays I've written about specific legal writing skills.
This essay is about creating active-sounding verbs. It first examines the passive voice, discussing both its shortcomings and the circumstances under which it is appropriate. An example of the former is when the passive voice masks the identity of the subject, as in the Aesop Fable in which a young mouse suggests that a bell "be hung" around a cat's neck. An example of the latter is when the result of the action is more important than the identity of the actor, as in Grandma got [sic] run over by a reindeer.
The essay then examines nominalizations. Nominalizations are words in drag: they are verbs or adjectives that masquerade, ostentatiously though unconvincingly, as nouns. The essay describes the shortcomings of nominalizations and also how to spot and correct them.
Number of Pages in PDF File: 1
JEL Classification: K00
Date posted: June 13, 2006