Density (Essay #3)

Bench & Bar (Kentucky), Vol. 66, No. 2, March 2002

1 Pages Posted: 13 Jun 2006

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Richard A. Bales

Ohio Northern University - Pettit College of Law

Abstract

This is the third in a series of short, entertaining essays I've written about specific legal writing skills.

Good legal writing is dense. Like poetry, it conveys lots of information in very few words. Judges don't have time to slough through a twenty-page discovery motion, and they shouldn't have to. Dense writing is likely to be read more carefully, and understood more thoroughly, than writing full of "fluff."

This essay contains ten tips for improving writing density. Examples include incessant editing, omitting phrases that serve no useful function (as a matter of fact), omitting redundancies (null and void), and using the active voice.

JEL Classification: K00

Suggested Citation

Bales, Richard A., Density (Essay #3). Bench & Bar (Kentucky), Vol. 66, No. 2, March 2002. Available at SSRN: https://ssrn.com/abstract=907143

Richard A. Bales (Contact Author)

Ohio Northern University - Pettit College of Law ( email )

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Ada, OH 45810
United States
419-772-2205 (Phone)

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